Web content, sales copy and gobbledygook

Editing has always been important to writing good sales copy, but the ease of publishing on the web has taken writing out of the hands of professionals and into the hands of anyone who wants to put up a website, blog or even to (excuse the expression) tweet.

In an effort to appeal to the search engines, self-styled web copywriters and SEO gurus have adapted gimmicks to fill their copy with keywords by restating the same ideas over (and over) again.

Web content needs to be focused and meaningful.  Marketing writer Diana Huff wrote about “Pruning Dead Wood” from copy by eliminating all the words that aren’t necessary, and making sure not to fall in love with your work, so you will be willing to edit it down to it’s core message.

Hubspot & David Meerman Scott came out with a “Gobbledygook Grader”, which scores web content, sales copy or press releases and tells you how many “useless, cliched, jargon and hype-filled words” your copy contains, stating that you “should instead write using words and phrases your buyers use and understand.”

With so much information available, people have become scanners rather than readers.  It’s critical to put the most important part of your message up front and make every sentence count. If you don’t capture their attention immediately and keep it, they may not even get down to the 2nd or 3rd paragraph.

Susan Martin, Marketing Coaching

By Susan Martin

NYC based Business Coach, Consultant and Strategist Susan Martin is no stranger to entrepreneurship, as she spent the first 25 years of her career running her own successful companies before deciding to dedicate her work to helping others achieve "Business Sanity." A professionally trained business coach, Susan is a popular business workshop facilitator and speaker at events and professional groups in and around New York City. She helps business owners, executives, managers, salespeople and independent professionals stop struggling and learn how to run their businesses easily and effectively so that they can make more money, have less stress and more quality time to enjoy life. Susan's clients want to increase sales and profits, boost productivity, manage their time, motivate their employees, increase performance and leadership skills, plan strategically and have balance in their lives. She provides the guidance, support, encouragement and accountability needed to achieve their goals. If running your business is a struggle, contact Susan to find out how she can help.